Thats me ;) Im totally a scorpio. I just went through Atomic affliction and decided that this was a cool glitter. I can never make glitters work on my crappy adobe photoshop so a little borrowing wont do to bad would it?
Ok, so theres this annoying girl in my class and she's really stupid. I wrote this following essay that she graded. You can never guess what she gave me. I actually thought my essay was good! Tell me your thoughts on my essa anyways..

Most people don’t know much when it comes to bullying. Even though everyone has been bullied before, a majority of people still don’t know how much it affects students of all ages! Bullying is an enormous problem in schools, especially for students. Not only does bullying cause multiple problems for the victim’s later life, it also has a bounce-back effect on the bully. Bullies will not lead a peaceful life and often end in suicide. Now is the time to stop bullying from occurring in the first place and we must work together to make this happen.
The most efficient and effective solution to this problem is to start a committee against bullying because a committee involves teamwork and that is just what we need to win this silent battle with bullies. The first step is to notify the school about this idea and let teachers specify the 5 most responsible students in his/her class depending on the number of students that want to join. If the student is interested, then he or she may sign up. The second step is to name the committee something such as: ABC: Anti Bullying Committee. Any organization will sound highly proper with a name and will most likely appeal to parents, teachers and other adults. Once the committee has been named, select members to print out flyers or notices to others telling them facts about this new committee, bullying and how they can help watch out or look for bullies. The third step is to let the committee member sign a pledge or an oath stating that they will report bullying or the mistreating of others and remain anonymous. This will greatly decrease the number of bullies in on campus or on buses. At the end of a school year, the deserving committee members will be given a gift to thank them for doing all they did this year. The gift would include candy, DOB (Don’t obey bullies) t-shirt and a matching keychain. If everyone contributes to help this committee by reporting bullies, there is no doubt that all schools one day will be bully free.
If your school did start a committee to stop bullying, your students will have almost an endless number of advantages against other school who haven’t yet implemented this plan. You never thought that less could mean more have you? Less bullying means more attention in school and more self confidence in students! Self confidence leads the student to a bright and cheerful future instead of the path that is filled with crime, hate and suicide. Paying attention in school will help students get his or her education they need to accomplish great things. Together, self confidence and attention in school will let the student lead a satisfying life.
In conclusion, now you know bullying is something that can be solved with cooperation, teamwork and careful planning. Just like Mrs. Parker quotes: “Failing to plan is planning to fail”. With bullies out of your range, there is just one less thing to worry about. Maybe we can even work on bigger problems like world peace one day!

That girl who read through mine gave me a 14! ( out of 20 ) She said my grammar was bad ( WTF ) and I asked her for specific reasons and this is where she said it didnt make sense: "Together, self confidence and attention in school will let the student lead a satisfying life." She said I had bad spelling and my beginning paragraph and ending paragraph was 1 out of 3. Such a **** hole. (No you dont want to know what I said) But its pretty frustrating to see a perfectly good paper get graded by a girls whos paper want so good. THe person who graded her paper gave her a 14 too, but at least he could point out every single reason why my paper was bad. The girl who graded mine? Nope. I wish I let someone else grade mine. I dont know why Im making this such a huge issue but Im very annoyed.

NOTE TO AUDREY: Kirsten.

EDIT: I accidently deleted the link to Atomic afflition for the image, but you can access the page through my affies. There was this big ugly blue square around that thingy and I pressed backspace...

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